多くの名勝負があったナナイロック地方大会!
とうとう迎えた最終戦では、どのような演技が見られるのでしょうか!?
The Prismarock Regional Tournament has been jam-packed with epic showdowns! Just what kind of electrifying performances await us in the final match?!
The region is called “Nanairockku” (ナナイロック) in Japanese. Perhaps a play on “Nanairo”, meaning 7 colors. “Prismarock” is a good localization and I think the Japanese one sounds a bit cheesy.
響華女学院からは昨年の全中王者!
孤高の天才と呼ばれたのもいまや昔!
From Kyoka Girls' High School, it's the reigning champ of last year's National Middle School Tournament! You might know her by the moniker "Solitary Prodigy"!
Aria has 2 monikers often coming after each other : “zenchuousha” (全中王者) the 中 alludes to middle grade school (they are now in high school), and it literally means “the ruler of all middle school”, perhaps because she won many middle school events. This becomes “reigning champ of the National Middle School Tournament”, which is less edgy. And then “kokou no tensai” 孤高の天才 is the “Solitary Prodigy” in English.
咲き誇る六花! 氷芽川アリア選手!
Behold the resplendent snowflake—Aria Himekawa!
“Senshu” (選手) meaning “competitor” is always added to the name when the announcer speaks about the competitor. English won’t say “Competitor Aria” repeatedly every time like in Japanese. But I think the “senshu” makes it feel more immersive and more formal as a competition event.
対する虹宮高校からは、この選手!
初の公式戦登場は、今年に行われた春大会!
And representing Nijimiya High School, we have the newcomer who debuted in his first official match at this year's Spring Tournament!
“Haru taikai” (春大会), which is the Spring Tournament, is first mentioned here. But the English one has capitalization that makes it more defined, which I thought was interesting.
その時は初心者だった彼が、グルーヴ杯でまさかのダークホース!
いまや大注目のグルーヴァーともなった――
He was just a rookie back then, but now he's emerged as a dark horse in the Groove Cup! He's the Groover catching everyone's eye!
Not something major but a bit of trivia, here “beginner” (shoshinsha / 初心者) is used in the Japanese, but in the THUNDERBOLT lyrics it really refers to Kakeru as “rookie” (ルーキー), like the English translation here.
“Groove Hai” (グルーヴ杯) literally means “groove cup”, is appropriately Groove Cup in English. However, “Groove Hai” is also a wordplay on the playable opening ceremony song “GROOVE HIGH”, and English players will miss the connection.
駆け抜ける稲妻! 閃道カケル選手!
Blitzing across the rails like a lightning bolt, it's Kakeru Sendou!
Linka knows Kakeru’s “Inazuma” (稲妻) play style by now and refers to it. In THUNDERBOLT the lyrics sing “like inazuma” going into the post-chorus. So in Japanese this is an early tease of the song.
あはは……すげー盛り上がり。
Haha... Wow, the crowd is getting really amped up.
そうだね。
それだけ、私とカケルの試合を楽しみにしてくれてる。
They really are. It just goes to show how excited everyone is about our match, Kakeru.
なら期待にこたえないとな!
Guess we've gotta live up to the hype, huh!
……ええ。当然。
それにいまのカケルも、きっとこたえられる。
Yes, absolutely. I'm sure you're more than capable of doing just that at your current skill level.
Aria uses “Kakeru” (カケル) to refer to Kakeru and not any other variants of “you”. In the first instance, the English translation managed to get “Kakeru” in there. But the 2nd one would sound strange if it tried to match the Japanese exactly, so it has to become “you”. However, in Japanese Aria consistently uses “Kakeru” everywhere and this has story meaning, as the player will soon learn that this is a point in the future, and when they return to the present, Aria uses a generic “you” with Kakeru. So a lot of nuance is lost in translation.
いやいや。
アリアのほうが天才だってよく言われてるじゃんか。
Nah, c'mon. You're the one that everyone calls a prodigy, right?
This reveals Kakeru also refers to Aria as “Aria” (アリア), but he always does this by default, unlike Aria.
……私は、世間で言われるような天才じゃないわ。
ただ努力を積み重ねて、誰よりもグルーヴコースターをしてきただけ。
...I'm not the prodigy people make me out to be. I've simply put in substantial effort and played Groove Coaster more than anyone else.
だけど……カケルは違う。
すごい勢いで成長してる。
But you're different, Kakeru. Your skills are developing at an incredible pace.
小さい頃から……そうだったの。
Ever since you were very young... I see.
ああ。だから俺は天才っていうか……運がよかっただけだよ。
Yeah. So I'm not really buying the genius angle, you know? I've just had luck on my side is all.
English often arbitrarily omits the long six dots (……) that are used mid-sentence. Aria especially likes to use them, and I think that adds to her quiet character, but I also understand that it’s weird in English unless it starts the sentence.
んで、グルコスを通じて出会った人たちが、
マジでいい人たちばっかり!
And I've met so many amazing people through Groove Coaster too!
Kakeru’s fiery way of speaking, like “majide” (マジで / for real), is lost here and the English one sounds more generic.
The “Gurukosu” (グルコス) shorthand is used for the first time here, but English is forever stuck with the long official name. This shorthand is not often used unless the character is happy-go-lucky like Kakeru.
“Bakkari” (ばっかり / only) implies he never met a single bad person through Groove Coaster. Not that different from English though.
虹宮の先輩や先生…
My fellow club members and our advisor...
“Nijimiya” (虹宮) is already mentioned here, so Japanese players know the school name earlier than English players.
それに私だって響華に入って、たくさんの人たちが成長させてくれた。
Just like you, many different people have helped me to grow since I enrolled at Kyoka.
But English and Japanese players both learn about Kyoka here.
レッツ、グルーヴコースター!
Time to groove!
I know the “LET’S GROOVE COASTER!” that the Japanese one uses here is grammatically wrong (unlike the in-game intro’s corrected “Let’s Groove!”), but I do think English should have used just that. It’s quirky, iconic, and more satisfying. Plus it is chanted for real in the “Story of Groove” song and soundtrack you can hear throughout the story.
You are not supposed to know at this point, but “Let’s” being before a comma is also important.